Please compare E-mail A with E-mail B, and comment...

Please compare E-mail A with E-mail B, and comment on both of them. Then, revise your favorite one for effectiveness. Rewrite or add any information if necessary. E-mail A Dear Madam Thank you for your e-mail of 24 March. We can certainly supply the cotton material you require. The price will be the same as before, i.e. $3.00 a metre and delivery can be next week if you require. We have plenty of stock so we could repeat the order if necessary. Please let us know if this is acceptable to you. Yours faithfully Sara Wang E-mail B Dear Ms. Hope With reference to your e-mail of 24 March 2019, we can certainly supply you with the cotton material in white you require. As you are a very good customer, we are prepared to process your order of 5000 metres at the old price of $3.00 a metre. We would deliver next week at any time to suit yourselves. We hold considerable stocks of this particular range, so further orders should not be a problem. Perhaps you would be kind enough to let us know the day and time you would like delivery to take place. Yours sincerely Sara Wang