Choose one of the topics to write a descriptive paragraph. You can refer to the grading criteria that followed. Remember to decide on the best kind of spatial order to use: right to left, left to right, top to bottom, far to near, outside to inside, and so on. 1. A room (e.g. After my sister spent two hours getting ready to go out, her room looks as if it had been hit by a magnitude 8.5 earthquake.) 2. The campus (e.g. The playground near my dormitory is full of activities on a sunny weekend afternoon.) 3. My home (e.g. My cousin’s apartment is a model of neatness and organization.) 评分标准:(每项1分,共10分) 1. Topic sentence与段落内容相关; 2. Topic sentence中有明确的topic; 3. Topic sentence中controlling idea是整个段落的overall impression; 4. Supporting sentences按照空间顺序叙述; 5. 有空间顺序signals; 6. Supporting sentences有具体细节的描述; 7. Concluding sentence对整个段落进行了总结; 8. 段落中没有语法错误; 9. 段落中没有与主题不相关的内容; 10. 段落表达连贯。
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